In the beginning, my goal was to be in the tennis team and improve my essay. Therefore, I am in the tennis team and improving my essay every single week. Usually I write about SAT prompts or things that are happening to me. When I looked back to see what I wrote the first time, I said that I was going to write about tennis and SAT prompts. Most of my writing is mostly about SAT prompts.
My new goal is to be in the badminton team because it's similar to tennis. I find that badminton is really fun. Also I am going to continue writing about SAT prompts. Continuing writing about SAT prompts can help me improve my essay. Also I am going to continuing writing about happy events. When I am writing about an exciting event, it makes me write more and more. Also I want to use difficult words on each of my essay. I don’t think I’m going to make it into the badminton team because this year is difficult. It’s difficult because the varsity people are really good and they have a quick reaction to hit it back. The varsity people are usually senior. Another goal is that if I don’t get into badminton team, I want to join track. Track because I want to run fast and not get tired.
Tuesday, November 3, 2009
New Purpose Statement
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Yes, you have clearly stuck with your goals for the first quarter--I'm glad they've been working out so well for you!
ReplyDeleteGood luck with badminton and track. I wish I were as active as you are! I need the exercise.
One writing suggestion: break the last paragraph up like this:
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My new goal is to be in the badminton team because it's similar to tennis. I find that badminton is really fun. Also I am going to continue writing about SAT prompts. Continuing writing about SAT prompts can help me improve my essay. Also I am going to continuing writing about happy events. When I am writing about an exciting event, it makes me write more and more. Also I want to use difficult words on each of my essay.
I don’t think I’m going to make it into the badminton team because this year is difficult. It’s difficult because the varsity people are really good and they have a quick reaction to hit it back. The varsity people are usually senior. Another goal is that if I don’t get into badminton team, I want to join track. Track because I want to run fast and not get tired.
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Hope that's helpful!